Haiku Poem for my Best Friend
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My Buddy
Deep eyes on each word
Quick tongue nears for a sweet kiss
His paw soft on mine
My Haiku
Perhaps not the typical topic for a haiku, but one I felt inspired to write.
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Thanks, my friend. I hoped that it would connect. I love my little guy. Thanks for making the first comment on this one!
Ahhh what a cutie! Such a perfect Haiku..I loved it and your sweet little friend.
Sunnie
Thanks, Sunnie. Glad you liked it. He is my sweet little buddy.
Nicely done. Great photo of a loving dog.
Love it! I've been keeping my eyes opens to see when you would post your first haiku. Your dog is adorable.
Thanks, Perspycacious! I love the photo, too. Captures his loving spirit.
Susan! Wonderful to see you. I actually thought about sending you my haiku to look over before I published it. I was so nervous and I rewrote it a bunch of times. Glad you like it. My dog IS adorable, and I hope my haiku captures that. If not, I'll revise it! :-) Glad you came by to read my first haiku! You were my inspiration.
Your Haiku is perfect! I love doing haiku's, and I hope you will do more of them. So glad that I inspired you. Thanks so much.
Well one thing that can be said about these types of poems...they are direct and on point! LOL! :) Btw- you do have a cute puppy. :)
Thanks, Susan. Your compliment means a lot to me. I'll try to do more!
So true, Cags! Short and sweet! Just like my puppy! haha. Btw, did Lord de Cross put you up to the cute puppy comment? haha Thanks for coming by!
Such few words have said so much about this adorable pet of yours. Haiku is wonderful and you have done a great job with it. Voted up as Awesome, Victoria.
Your haiku creates an image that is very beautiful.
adorable! I loved it. The sweetness of a paw on yours is very tender.
Thank you for sharing a haiku with us. :)
Ruchira, thanks so much! It's fun to try to cram a description into a limited amount of words with the haiku. Thanks for appreciation my effort!
Vinaya--I'm glad you think it's beautiful. Thanks so much!
MissOlive--I might try more. That was fun to do. I loved your comment about the tenderness of his paw on mine. I'm glad the haiku captured that. So sweet. Thanks for reading and commenting!
This is cute. I'm sure so many people can relate to these small moments with their pets, its what makes them family. Thanks for sharing, this is sweet and intelligent!
Ah, wonderingwoolley, what a nice comment! "Sweet and intelligent." Kind of like my dog. :-) He is a joy. I'm glad I captured a moment with him on paper. Thanks again!
Oh how sweet and beautiful....voted up....debbie
Thanks,Debbie! I'm glad you think so. And thanks for the vote!
This is a precious haiku!
Thanks, cat on a soapbox. He's a precious boy, so a precious haiku is appropriate! Thanks for the comment!
oh, aren't dogs just the most wonderful creatures?
Aw, yes, PDX! Dogs are delightful creatures! :-)
A fabulous Haiku and your dog looks so cute!
Movie Master--Thanks for complimenting my haiku AND my dog. He IS a little doll!
Beautiful and thanks for sharing.
Take care and enjoy your day;
Eddy.
Thanks, Eddy, for reading and commenting!
So what Vicky if it wasn't a typical topic? It was, to me, an awesome topic and truly adorable, just like Gizmo :)
Thanks, Sharyn! Yes,Gizmo is adorable, huh? And awesome. As are your comments! :-)
this is just amazing
Thanks, jaide. He IS amazing!
Amazing haiku!
Thanks, haikutwinkle. With a name such as yours, I would think you have some amazing haiku(s?) yourself...?
victoria... dogs are better than people :-)
I totally agree, PDX. Totally. :-)
Gizmo is a cutie pie. A pretty little ditty.
Thanks, molometer. I agree. Gizmo is the cutest little thing ever!
This is a very cute poem.
Thanks, writer20! A cute poem for a cute dog! :-)
I've never owned a dog, but Hubs like this one is pushing me to delay no more and just get one! That is one sweet face, and your Haiku is beautifully expressed. Is Gizmo a Havanese breed?
Lynne
Patriette, I didn't know how much I would love having a dog until I got Gizmo. He is my little buddy. I love him so much and dread the day he leaves me. He's not a Havanese. He's a wonderful mix of shih tzu, Pekingnese, and terrier. He looks a lot like a Maltese. Get a dog! They are such little friends. Thanks for the comments. He does have a sweet face, doesn't he? :-)
absolutely lovely victoria!! glad to have found you here, voted up and beautiful :)
Thanks, secondimage! so glad you came by!
thejeffriestube Level 4 Commenter 4 months ago
Sweet in it's simplicity, but bears a message that any animal lover can connect with.