How to Write a Valentine's Day Haiku Poem

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By Victoria Lynn

How to Write a Haiku

Writing a poem, particularly a haiku, for Valentine's Day, doesn't have to be too difficult. I'll give you the basic format and several examples to get you started. First, use the basic format of three lines. Count out five syllables in the first line, seven in the second line, and another five in the third line. For a more thorough description of what a haiku is, check out this hub: http://bnoelle.hubpages.com/hub/How-to-Write-a-beginners-Haiku

Now, a haiku by nature can be a bit mysterious, so start the first line with a description that doesn’t reveal the person. Add a longer description, as descriptive as you can get for the second line, then include the person’s name in the third line. Of course, you can put anything in any line as you wish. This is just a suggestion to get you started.


Now this is love...!

Victoria Lynn and Gizmo
Victoria Lynn and Gizmo

Write a Valentine Haiku for that Special Person!


Chuckle, warm and rich,

Smile with sparkling eyes of green

You, my charming Mark


Or leave your valentine's name out:


Eyes of deepest green

Give me goose bumps every time

You, and only you.


Rhyme the first and last line of the haiku, if you prefer:


Days of light and dark

You’re always in my corner

You, my dear, sweet Mark


Or make all the lines rhyme:


Days of light and dark

You’re my lifeline; you’re my spark—

You, my dear, sweet Mark


Make your haiku specific to Valentine’s Day if you wish:


Not just on this day

But for each day of my life

Be my Valentine


Make Your Own Haiku into a Special Gift

Simple enough? Try your own hand at haiku. To me, it’s harder than it looks, as it’s hard to cram all you want to say in just a few syllables or a few lines. If you want to say more, do more than one stanza and link several haiku stanzas together to make a longer poem.

When your haiku is complete, do something special with it. Write it in a Valentine’s Day card to your loved one. Another idea is to type it up in a nice font—perhaps a script—and print it out on colored paper or other paper with a print such as hearts. Put it in a romantic frame and your gift is complete.

A poem is a gift that will last forever, always reminding the giver and receiver of that special day. A poem is a great gift, as it packs fewer calories than chocolates and lasts much longer than flowers.

Comments

Sunshine625 profile image

Sunshine625 Level 8 Commenter 4 months ago

Fantastic Valentine Haiku's Vicki! I like the format and details!! :)

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Just Ask Susan Level 8 Commenter 4 months ago

Makes me want to go and write more Valentine's Haiku's. Excellent Hub!

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homesteadbound Level 8 Commenter 4 months ago

This is great! I have never written any haiku's, but hubs like this keep tempting me!

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Victoria Lynn Hub Author 4 months ago

Thanks, Sunshine! This hub was a fun one to put together. Thanks for letting me include a link to yours! :-)

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Victoria Lynn Hub Author 4 months ago

Thanks, Susan! You're the one who got me started on haiku. My inspiration, I guess you could say. :-) Go write more!! :-)

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Victoria Lynn Hub Author 4 months ago

homesteadbound--Give in to your temptations and write a hiaku!!!!! Try it; you'll like it!

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Rosemay50 Level 8 Commenter 4 months ago

Nice hub. My favourite was

Not just on this day

But for each day of my life

Be my Valentine

The time seems to be speeding away now we are already thinking about Valentines day.

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Victoria Lynn Hub Author 4 months ago

Thanks, Rosemay! Time does fly from holiday to holiday doesn't it. I'm glad you told me your favorite. Since all I wrote about the guy with green eyes referred to my special guy, I think I'll put them together and give them all to him this Valentine's Day. Thanks for your comments!

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prasetio30 Level 8 Commenter 4 months ago

I wish I could make a beautiful Valentine's Day poem. But thanks for teach us how to make this. Very inspiring hub. Well done, Victoria. Rated up and take care!

Prasetio

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Victoria Lynn Hub Author 4 months ago

Thanks, prasetio! You can do it, too! Try a haiku. They're short and sweet!

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drbj Level 8 Commenter 4 months ago

I like-u your Valentine haiku, Victoria. Here is mine to you:

Happy Valentine

To you, Victoria Lynn,

Let good times begin!

You might enjoy my "Funny Valentines for People You Hate."

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Victoria Lynn Hub Author 4 months ago

drbj--Thanks for the haiku! I read your hub, too. Very funny! Maybe I could add a link to yours in mine!

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Movie Master Level 8 Commenter 4 months ago

Hi Victoria, I loved these valentine Haiku's, you have inspired me to write one for my husband!!

Thanks for sharing and voted up.

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Victoria Lynn Hub Author 4 months ago

Great, Movie Master! I hope your haiku turns out well and your husband loves it! Thanks for the vote!

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Capedium Level 5 Commenter 4 months ago

Beautiful..

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Victoria Lynn Hub Author 4 months ago

Thanks for the beautiful comment, Capedium. I appreciate it!

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Ingenira Level 5 Commenter 3 months ago

Beautiful and fun ! thanks for the tips.

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Victoria Lynn Hub Author 3 months ago

Ingenira--glad you thought it was fun. I did!

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Angela Biggs Level 2 Commenter 3 months ago

Hi Victoria, It really helped me understand what is haiku and how to write one. I have made an attempt (can't call it successful) to write. Though it is not lovely but painful instead :) I have been following for your useful tips. You tell a lot about hubpages :) Thanks once again :P

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Victoria Lynn Hub Author 3 months ago

Hey, Angela, I'm glad it helped you understand what a haiku us. Keep trying on the writing part--you'll get it! I'm glad to hear that you're following for the tips. I was hoping I could share some helpful hubs. Thanks for your kind comments!

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tammyswallow Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

I tend to be a proverbial wind bag when I am writing. I haven't written many haiku in my life time. This is helpful. Thanks for sharing!

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Victoria Lynn Hub Author 3 months ago

Try it, Tammy! You'll like it, I bet. It IS a challenge to get a lot of meaning in so few words!

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Pamela Kinnaird W Level 6 Commenter 3 months ago

I enjoyed this very much. I'm socially sharing it. Great idea for Valentine's.

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Victoria Lynn Hub Author 3 months ago

Pamela--Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing it, too!

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